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Post by SeleneHera on Fri Oct 03, 2008 6:33 am

Hi (yes I'm a n00b)
Even though I abosuletly LOVE quizilla and fanfiction, I don't actually write stuff on it. (i know lame) I prefer actually writing in a notebook or on my laptop.
I can be well, Random when it comes to coming up with stories (random in that I never, I repeat NEVER finish a daydream/story when I write it. I will try though)
I'm currently writing a story about a 16-year-old Grim Reaper that's -shocker- a girl Shocked Rolling Eyes Um, Its kind of like Buffy the Vampire Slayer (yea who remembers that show), Supernatural, Death Note (only a small percentage like 0.00001%), and any other things I can't think of right now. It's set in modern times in New York and another world called the Upper World (see why I'm on here now? Smile ) Um, that's all I will write about it for now. If any of you are interested, please I insist comment on it. If you want I could go further. (its gets a bit religious with names like Eden and Azrael [Angel of death] so don't hurt me.) I may even put in small parts of it. (please don't steal my idea or else YOU DIE!!!! Evil or Very Mad , I may want to publish it one day.) Okay that's it Really!
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Devin on Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:03 am

Wow, awesome!
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Dark on Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:06 am

cool,and you know Jason's a n00b to,you two are perfect for eachother!
but I say that to every girl he knows and then Intrdue's me to
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Devin on Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:51 am

You are Jason though. . .
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Dark on Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:55 am

Evil or Very Mad Bad Mistake! Evil or Very Mad
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Devin on Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:01 am

You have the same IP
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Julian on Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:43 am

Wow what conflict...
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Dark on Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:37 pm

Devin wrote:You have the same IP
brother's.
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Devin on Fri Oct 03, 2008 11:40 pm

Dude, Doreto. Now we're both Edward?
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by SeleneHera on Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:37 am

lol! lol, glad you guys like it. Umm -trying to think of what else to add scratch - OH! And Eden's, this story's protanginst (sp?), BFF well used to be best friend Susanna (long story short- she got jealous of Eden with her ultra-cool powers and left mysteriously. plus, she is angry @ her for having to -ahem- take away her cousin's soul) is going to become a bad guy (gee never would have guessed Rolling Eyes ) But! I think she should become one of the Seven Deadly Sins (Envy, no?). Also, what should the name of the antangnist (i just can't spell today) be? He's not going to be a total bad guy since the Creator (think God but not truly God confusing?) is not exactly trustful. Anyway, the ant. should kind of make Eden doubt her loyalties but can't have a like a name alluding to the devil (say like Lucifer) But if he should only if it will fit. (wow I just contradicted myself) Tell me what you think.
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by SeleneHera on Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:40 am

And wth I write a lot!
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Devin on Sat Oct 04, 2008 5:10 am

Wow! Dang, yeah. BTW, for name of Antagonist, I have one: Belezebub. Or if it's going to be less hardcore, Peter. I think it's obvious I'm selecting names from Random from the bible. Belezebub is an alternate name for lucifer, and Peter of course of the 12 deciples.

More names: Johoel, Sophia, ((Total stolen)) Selene. ((cough, I know it's the first part of your name but I stole it from Inheritance.))

Je-hO-L, So-fee-uh, Sell-eane. ((For punctuation in case anybody is wondering.))
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Lailah on Sun Oct 05, 2008 4:26 am

I think just plain Lucifer is a threatening name. It sounds, I don't know, cold, dead. But since Lucifer is out of the question...

I really like what I'm seeing so far. I have problems sitting down and actually writing sometimes as well, so I know how hard it can be. It's a lot easier if you come up with a really vague outline, filling in details as you get there.

Here's a link to some names that might serve your purpose for antagonist names.

I'd really like to see some bits and peices of your story as you develop it.

You definitely have a lot of potential.



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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Devin on Sun Oct 05, 2008 7:55 am

I'm a writer but I don't publish anything. Mine's just published in my journal in black ink. Little kids can't exactly post poetic writing based on random things.
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Dark on Sun Oct 05, 2008 9:49 pm

Lailah wrote:I think just plain Lucifer is a threatening name. It sounds, I don't know, cold, dead. But since Lucifer is out of the question...

I really like what I'm seeing so far. I have problems sitting down and actually writing sometimes as well, so I know how hard it can be. It's a lot easier if you come up with a really vague outline, filling in details as you get there.

Here's a link to some names that might serve your purpose for antagonist names.

I'd really like to see some bits and peices of your story as you develop it.

You definitely have a lot of potential.



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Shocked wow,Demon names sweet! Twisted Evil
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Julian on Mon Oct 06, 2008 12:33 am

Devin wrote:Dude, Doreto. Now we're both Edward?
1.) its Julian
2.) I want to find a Jasper pic
3.) There is no three
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by SeleneHera on Mon Oct 06, 2008 10:18 pm

Okay update!
1) I really like the name Beelzebub : Prince of Demons, aka Lord of the Flies, former highest ranking angel in heaven and Leonard : Master of black magic and sorcery and also, Mastema : Leader of fallen angels whose job is to tempt men to sin and accuse them before God. Thank you for all your help.
2)Like I said before I'm going to include the 7 Deadly Sins as of course bad guys (I'm kind of obsessed . I plan on using the Latin terms as names:
luxuria, gula, avaritia, acedia, ira, invidia, and superbia. Which one should be Susanna? I was thinking Ira or Invidia.


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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Lailah on Tue Oct 07, 2008 9:41 am

You're welcome. ^_^

I'm obsessed with Latin. In my chorus class, I rave about all the Latin songs. My friends get annoyed with me and tell me it's a "dead language". *scoffs*
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by Julian on Tue Oct 07, 2008 11:44 am

*Blinks*
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by SeleneHera on Wed Oct 08, 2008 4:46 am

Oh and for those of you who don't know the latin terms are for Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy and Pride, respectively. And just because I didn't know tis -gasp- pairings: Lucifer: pride
Mammon: greed
Asmodeus: lust
Leviathan: envy
Beelzebub: gluttony
Satan/Amon: wrath
Belphegor: sloth
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Post by Devin on Wed Oct 08, 2008 9:25 am

Nice pairing. Beelzebub! I told you! Prince of demons, captain of Satan. ((In military standards))
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Re: Selene's Newest story

Post by SeleneHera on Sat Oct 11, 2008 7:55 am

These are some pics on how I think Azrael should look like (first Grim Reaper, Fallen Angel, Angel of Death...) I'm drawing my own picture of her but these are just some ideas.

I'll add more later.
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